The Elder Chaos

by James
in Utah

July 15th, 2003

Long ago the Elders were chosen to maintain the races of the world and keep the earth working, they had lived millions of years and at one time, were wise until their uproar . They each had a key to one element of the earth. They could unlock rain and intitle forests to grow. Jaklis Dragon Volnick. Shunned by others who were jealous for the gifted FireMagic. He was shunend, hurt and banned out of society with those it helped, other then other Volnicks. Then he turned. He is now the Elder of Revenge. Dais, the human one. Key holder and Elder of Nature, he wanted to stop Jaklis from abusing and using dark deeds for his keys to the earth, he was bent on stopping him even if it meant killing out the world. For Dias was a Kalris, a pure and wise mixture race. And then there was Fale, a young Chog bent on ruling the world with his key ability, Jaklis and Dias both resented him amongst their council, they knew his cause was the most unpure. The council was broken for each had different wants of actual evil. They still maintained the earth but fought each other with terror causing the earth to be tretorous and bad. All that once was buetiful was deserted and grim. This is the time of The War of the Elders of Chaos.

"Ha,like the black flagons would dare challenge Sureto" said a guard of the Turyuin incampment on the southern shore of Balmilth. Sureto was their leader. "Ha, get me another beer, Aoel" said the guard. "One flagon per march" said the servant Aoel. "NOW"! barked the guard. But he never ha time to drink it. Because just then arrows of fire pored down on them like rain catching the suns rays. Suddenly an arrow hit right by the Guards foot. He looked at it curiosly/ It was glowing red and orange, not a flame on the arrow, just the glow of FireMagic and runes of ancient Volnick. "Oh no, not the Black Flagins work, i say they can't learn to activate a bottled spell or drink a potion, much less learn the work of rune magic, no i think the Elder of Revenge is upon us" said the guard. "FALL BACK MEEEEN"! screamed the guard. The guard rushed out onto the battlefield, catching a sword that a dieing man threw up accidentally when he was falling. The guard wield it strongly. "If only this was a wizards sword, or an elementals sword, then i could defeat these Volnickians" he said "and i have made bad choices in my life but creator if i live, i'll change and if i die, please have mercy on your will". But just then an arrow struck him in the heart. He fekt the rush of FireMagic and the power of runes rushing through his veins. He was cloaked for one mild second in darkness, before he was taken up to a better place. "Suretos most trusted guard is dead" yelled one mage holding his Elemental sword "Pleas Creator, give me the power to defeat this beast". Then as the Creator granted the noble Mages wish, he created the spell he new best (but could not do it without the Creators bidding, for he is as any man without the Creeators Will, for all power comes from him), the Lightning rod and struck it right at the army of Volnicks. But a Fire Quak shielded the blow. "Suntom my brother mage, he has been chained to the Dark One" said the mage. "I HEAR YOU" said a dark cloaked mage behind him. The noble Mage turned around. "Suntom" he whispered. "Sureto" said the cloaked man before he unleashed an axe on Sureto. "Creator, please give me the power to defeat him".........


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