in Utah
Damian, I find it inappropriate to explicitly course someones work as a "not to do", everyone's topic is just that, <u>their</u> topic, so you cannot really judge bad and good upon each person's topics. Also, Damian, I find it appalling that you would write a "How-To" book (which is the epitimy of good, and nothing more then a work of <u>fiction</u> according to what is good and what is not) when you do not punctuate, spell correctly, or keep your sentences flowing. And what is to say about a title? I agree, on some terms, that certain titles do turn off visitors, like ones including mass exclamation marks, but on that same term, "to each his own", you understand?
Now if you want to write something with <u>TIPS</u> maybe talking about styles of writing, and titles, would be appropriate, but there is no set way to write a fiction, and most of it comes will skill and practice.
One more thing, Damian. Everyone makes mistakes, and so I do not hold you (to the point of me being angry with you) entirely responsible, but please, the length of a story is up to the author, and the greatest way to ensure that the reader loses interest is to post short things, and make a thirty-two page book, become a 32 PART Book.
Sorry, Damian, but I speak for myself (and most probably the entire public of kidpub), when I say that, we do not want you criticizing our authors with the lack of intellegence and knowledge that you have aquired in this matter.
Good day.
~James
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