Teen Troubles

Ch.1 The Cafeteria Cutie
"Hey, Trish look at that cute boy!", my friend Kay pointed across the cafeteria. He was cute.
He had white skin and very disticnt features on his face.The teeth on this boy were as white as a piece of a piece of printer paper.Deep blue-green eyes, like looking into the ocean.
The cheekbones on him stuck out a bit & there were freckles acoss his short, thin nose. His lips were perfectly shaped, with a perfect red rose color.And this hair was the color of sand.There were many muscular features to be found on this cutie.
Suddenly,this cutie, turned around & gave ME a smile that shone across the cafeteria!
"Let's go meet him!", I said plling Kay by the arm."No, way!', Kay pulled back."I'd be SO embaressed.What if I get tounge tied?'
"You WON'T! Look he's coming this way!Come on!",I said still pulling Kay."You go!", Kay pulled away."Maybe I will!"
I walked away thinking: "Please, it's just a guy.What'd she chicken out for?"
I looked back at Kay, who was watching in amazement & bewilderment."Oh,exscuse me!", I said looking up."What's your name?"
" Jordan.And you?" Jordan coked his head & put that smile on his face again."Trishia.My frends call me Trish!", I smiled.Though my smile was probably nothing like his."Trish.I like that!",Jordan slightly bit his lip & bobbed his head."So Trish, how old are you?" "I'm 14!", I showed my age with my fingers."Cool.Me too! Well,Trish,do you think you might want to go out saturday night?",Jordan actually SEEMED NERVOUS! "Like to. I'd love to!", I jumped up. "Great!Seven O' Clock good?!" I'd never seen such wide eyes ON A BOY!
"Perfect!Pick me up at 28 Pauding St. Cortlandt Manor!Here I'll write it down for you!",I handed Jordan the paper."See you there!",I skipped to my seat.
Kay's mouth was wide open & her eyes bearly blinked! "I just got a date!", I said sitting (or should I say leaping) onto my chair.
I looked at Kay & said, "Close your mouth, You'll catch flies!"