in Rhode Island
May 18th, 2004
It's kind of short, and there's some grammar problems in it, but hey, I wrote it just now. Give me a break peoples.
Sorry about the . between some of the words, that's the only way I can write it without you guys trying to dechiper what it says.
The confining darkness bore down on her like an immense weight. On her knees, head in her hands she weeped, creating a small puddle beneath her feet. As her tears fell, they began to change. The clear liquid turning a dark red, falling to the ground and breaking. Everything was like misery in this world, nothing happy ever came, and if it did it always changed into something worse. It was as if happiness was not a word anymore...
The g.irl looked up, the tips if her brown hair stained with bl.ood. Could it be? No, nothing so bright ever existed in this world. But then again...maybe...She stood up slowly, testing to see if it would fade away. But it didn't. She wiped her eyes, and smiled, or attempted to do so. She felt her feet move beneath her, running towards the bright substance at the end. Running towards the light.
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