The Last War Chapter 1 [real chapter]

by Tim
in

September 29th, 2003

[Didn't have time to finish chapter will be continued] Suprise Attack

Elfron and his small army of 500 elves were riding back to Elgon, their capital. "It's about an hour to Elgon," Elfron said. "Wait, I heard something," an elf named Elfon whispered. Whiss! A hail of arrows came raining down on the group. "Take cover!" Elfron yelled. Elfon turned around loosing an arrow. "Aaah!" a man screamed thudding to the ground. "Their in the trees!" Elfon exclaimed. The elves all fired into the trees. Men fell to the ground repeatedly. Another hail rained down killing about a hundred elves. "Shields up!" Elfron yelled. Four small camps were set up surrounded by shields. "Look out!" Elfon yelled firing an arrow. A man rushed out of a bush. The arrow got him in the throat. He fell to the ground, dead. "Nice shot," Elfron congratulated. Another hail of arrows made him shut up. Elfon fired an arrow at the trees. It hit a man right between the eyes. Now Elfon was firing arrows everywhere. A man fell dead here, there,everywhere. "We need fire arrows," Elfon said. "Yes, I know," said Elfron. "Make a fire with branches from twigs," Elfon suggested. "Yes, start the fire!" Elfron ordered. Soon a fire was blazing. Elfon fired a fire arrow at a tree. It burst into flame. Men jumped from the tree only to get cut down by elven arrows. Elfon fired another fire arrow at a tree. The same thing happened. Then he fired another fire arrow. Everyone got up to shoot their arrows.


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