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May 19th, 2004
You think everyone thinks you suck? You got that wrong, everyone thinks I suck! Anyways I wanted to say that with the pronounciations. With the Breastplate you may also want to say it guards the Chest.
I like your story a whole lot, it has good description and keeps my attention. This I think you could get published by one of the larger publishing companies, not the small Alaska Books. By the way do they have a web site? I would like to look at it. Anyways great job with the story. :)
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