in Arizona
July 31st, 2007
Yes, this is NOT good poetry (I'm not very poetic, or poetical, as I like to call it). This is a sample of my random poetry. Feedback is appreciated!
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I love my converse looking shoes
They make me want to count by two's
They are black and white
They're really really tight
I got bored one day
And my shoes weren't okay
So I grabbed some sharpies
So they wouldn't look like harpies
Then drew on my coverse
Once even in reverse
After that they were so pretty
And they were not a pity
Because they are really cool
They make others drool
That is my shoes' story
And it wasn't at all gory
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Well, you've got major
Well, you've got major creative flair! So many of my friends would agree with you're poem. I'm not a converse person, but I still like your poem! You're a way better rhymer than me!
Thanks! I commented on your
Thanks! I commented on your latest poem as a thank you.