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Gabriella in Math Class, Doodling |
August 2nd, 2007
"Hey Dad, Mom, Derek! How 'bout this place?" Casey exclaimed. The Drew family was trying to pick the place they were going to stay when they go on vacation in the UK. Casey was picking the house while the others were packing, getting tickets, or eating. Casey was looking at a castle where they shot the Harry Potter movies. Casey's parents came in and saw the castle. "That's really nice. We'll take it!" Mr. Drew said. So then they took the castle and then the next week they were off to the UK.
When they got to the castle a realtor met up with them and they rented out the house and met the house keeper. His name was Mark and he was a mean, harsh, old man. Then they put their belongings in their rooms. That night Casey heard a noise and saw that her note book was missing. She then found a clue: a piece of white hair. Then she relized that it was a piece of Mark's hair. She tiptoed into his room and plucked a piece of hair off his head.
The naxt morning Derek claimed his best sneakers were missing and Mrs. Drew's necklace was missing as well! Then they saw Mark. "That's who took our stuff!" Casey exclaimed. "Give it all back!" Derek exclaimed. "Fine! You caught me! Here's your stuff. I stole your things so you'll leave and no one will come here ever again! This is MY house!" he grumped and stormed off. The last of the Drew's vacation was happy and there were no problems.
THE END!
I know it sucks. But give me credit for doing it really quick. I did it in like 10 minutes. And I didn't write it down. I made it up as I went.
Carissa
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Yeah, you're right, it DOES
Yeah, you're right, it DOES suck!
Carissa, Don't listen
Carissa,
Don't listen to Kazel I don't think it stinks I think is awsome and I really mean it.
Thanks Katie. I made it in
Thanks Katie. I made it in like 10 minutes!
It's not bad but i liked it
It's not bad but i liked it where you used chapters and didn't rush totally through it. but that's me and you don't have to listen to me (or Kazel for that matter) i just like reading stories where i can get attatched to the characters. But I do like this fanfiction a lot.