Darkest Hour.(chapter 1.)

by Nicole
in British Columbia

Amy lived on a breeding farm with her mom and older sister.There dad had moved away and lived in Englend.They never saw him at all.He had a big fall in a horse show and had badley hert him self.Then he had tacken off and left Amy who was onley 2 at the time alown with her mom.Ann.Her sister at the time had gone of to bording school after his acedent.It had been so hard on Lu(that was her name)that she went of to it.Leving Amy and there mother behind to take care of the farm.They had built it up and were now training horses for show Her mom to was a champion jumper but there fathers acadint changed every thing.Amy was still thinking about this when she was startled by her alam clock.It was a nother day at last chance ranch.


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Few spelling mistakes but

Few spelling mistakes but otherwise it's good!

Thanks so much!

Thanks so much!

Nice, but try to stretch it

Nice, but try to stretch it out more, like describing every single thing thouroghly. Great job!

yeah its a great idea but

yeah its a great idea but again just try to strech the details out like not explain every thing at once


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