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December 31st, 2007
"Hurry up, Star!" Swift hissed. "I can't go much farther ," Star replied.
"You must," Swift said,"Wave didn't give us this chance just to be capture again," Swift and Star escaped from the Dark Kingdom, which was the group of cats that ruled the forestlands. Star, Wave, and Swift were captured by the Dark cats. Wave helped Swift and Star escape by attacking the cats guarding them all, while Swift and Star slipped away. It cost Wave his life. Now, they were on the run from the Dark Cats. "We just have to make it out of the forest and back to our camp,"Swift said. The three cats Wave, Star, and Swift were spying on the Dark Cats. The mission was going well until they were caught and taken captive. "I can see the edge of the forest!" Star exclaimed. Seconds later they were out of the forest. "Let's get back to camp," Swift ordered. They crawled through a small hole. At the end of the hole, it opened up to a large cave. There they were met by their camp. They leader, Moon, came down to consult with them."What happened? Where's Wave?" he asked. "We were captured while spying. Then, Wave sacrificed himself to let us escape," Star said sadly. "What did you find out?" Moon asked. "We found out that the Dark Kingdom isn't satisfied with the territory they have. They are planning to attack and take over the prairie land. Our land." Swift answered. Angry murmurs spread through the crowd of cats."Then it has become clear of what we have to do," Moon said, as the cats quieted down,"we must attack the Dark Kingdom!"
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I didn't really get I think
I didn't really get I think that you should just put a tad bit more detail in it. Other then that GOOD JOB!
good but you ripped off the
good but you ripped off the Warriors series
cats in a forest, a leader, a camp
sounds REALLY familiar
that may be true, but you
that may be true, but you should have seen some of the stories i've read! also, have you seen my account page??!!!!
I'm not done with the book,
I'm not done with the book, it's only the first chapter!
Thanks for reading my story!
Thanks for reading my story! I really appreciatec it!!
Honestly, don't be
Honestly, don't be offended.
But it makes it worse if the first chapter gives off that you copied bluntly another book - especially since you HAVE read the Warriors series.