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The Bombs of Fire pounded against the window as Luna and O'toole Thornbush waited for their children to be born. They whispered quietly among themselves about what to name the new twins. Their other three daughters were shivering with exitement. Acavaticca, Flora, and Evie Thornbush were the already-born-daughters. Evie was three, Flora five, and Acavaticca nine. Acavaticca was mulling over names in her mind. Zashara and Zeina? Erila and Evana? Venira and Veronica? Suddenly, the perfect names came to her. Nashayla and Nara. She hurried over to her mother. "Mother, what about Nashayla and Nara Thornbush?" Luna looked up and the glint in her eyes brightened as she smiled. She looked at her husband. O'toole beamed and his mouth stretched into a wide grin. "Perfect." whispered Luna. Then the fairy doctor came in with two, squirming fairy babies. They looked exactly alike exept one was too small. A primie. Luna pointed to the bigger one. "Nara." Then she pointed to the primie. Luna's wings glimmered as she said: "Nashayla." Luna knew what she would have to do. In the time of war, all primies had to be changed into a human and stay as a human until the time is right to go back. Acavaticca turned to her mother and asked :"May I hold the smaller one? Nashayla?" Luna mulled over it for a few seconds then agreed. Acavaticca held her in her arms and said: "I promise,I will be the best oldest sister ever, and I will give you the gift of kindness." magic and warmth surrounded Nashayla and Nara. Flora said in her high pitched, bossy five year old voice:"I will give you the gift of curiosity." Sparkles twinkled in the air all around. "And I," giggled Evie, "will give you the gift of laughter." It is a fairy tradition for all of the family members to give the new children gifts. Acavaticca handed Nashayla to her mother. O'toole had Nara in his arms. "I will give you the gift of song." O'toole said. Then Luna said: "I will give you the gift of beauty." Just as Luna said that, Nashayla and Nara's eyes opened and glittery, shining wings popped out of their backs. "Al esh npugna. Welcome." cooed Luna. Then, the family headed to the Portal of Primies. They all hugged and kissed Nashayla as the bombs plummeted overhead. Then they set Nashayla into the portal, and watched as Nashayla Kiara Thornbush dissapeared into utter blackness.
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Wow- awesome story! Continue
Wow- awesome story! Continue this!
Also,
add some spaces.
It will make your story seem less condensed!
interesting new concept for
interesting new concept for a fairy story. i've never heard of fairy primies turning into humans until it was safe to return...i was a premie, so does that make me..?
"And this is Nymphadora--"
"Don't call me Nymphadora, Remus."
"...this is Nymphadora Tonks, who prefers to go by her surname only."
"You would too, if your fool of a mother called you 'Nymphadora'"
Remus Lupin and Nymphadora Tonks of Harry Potter ~TON
Very, very good, very unique
Very, very good, very unique also. Keep writing !
-Life is either a daring adventure or nothing, Helen Keller
Bethany- No it does
Bethany-
No it does not,unless you are a fairy.
-Giada