Mars misson (chapter story)Draft peice

Mars misson (chapter story)Draft peice
by By:EThan Carpender and Min Song

On earth there was a man who wants to go to Mars and his name was Ben.he was a good spy so he snicked to a rocletship and he blasted off into space. And a guards kept on shooting at the ship but it wont help to stop the roket ship. It took two years to go to Mars. and now he is 37 years old he was very suspishus (OH NO) the ship was out of feul so he screamed Ahhhhhhhhhh! It was very loud.suddllenluy the Alien heard a sound so the alien got more guards and when he got of the ship he pulled out one mushin gun and yelled HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And he hid on a rock so the alien look for him so his heart beep so hard that a alien heard it little so the alien split up so one alien come to a rock and a alien said frize so they took him to a shooting place so the alien said any last words intill suddllenluy something hit the ship so Ben ran to the exit and it was hes parnter Josh so he keep on shooting at the aliens Kaboom! Kaboom! Kaboom! so his was out of feul to so he got out but the aliens desided to give up so the alien told them we will give you whatever they want so ben said how about some fuel for our ship but they said we could get it with magic but they ran out. But he had another plan he asked do you have some roket shoes but the alein said he dosen't have any. So they got in a big fight! The alien got shot by Josh and the other aliens joined the fight. Josh asked Ben to join the fight! Ben got shot by one of aliens before he did. And Josh got the captin of the aliens so the aliens gave up. So the alien gave their mother ship but some of the aliens went in just incase they crash it and blow up into bleven. And what really happen is the aliens crashed and blowup into bleven because he cannot drive so they crashed the moon so they got out and they saw more aliens on the moon so one of the alien said hands up so Ben said HELP!!!. It was so loud that the Mars aliens could here it but the mothership was the only one but some of the aliens had jetboots so they blast off but still they were no match for the moon aliens because they have more. The captin alien from Mars he said make one more mothership they made it for 12 years!!! Now ben is 59 years old.Ben is almost to old to fight but he is a trained perfeshanal he cant stop fighting. his safty.(to be continued) CHAPTER TWO The aleins return with fighters. And the aliens were scared the aliens was covering wile they are triying to work the pepersprade and finilly they got the peper spray done. And when the aliens peeked out he sprayed the peeperspray and then they got red on their eyes so the screamed HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so alien soilgers came and got their laser gun and ben finally gave up. But he siked and shoot one off the aliens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And he said I always new that trick so he keep on shooting but Ben got shot in the arm but the Mars aliens help them out. But the Mars aliens was no match for the Moon aliens because the Moon aliens was practicing and practicing so the Mars aliens ran alway but not Ben and Josh because they were so brave. Intill then a gigant meataerock crash the moon and when it opened It was full of green asid but the Moon aliens tuched the acid and got mealted and made more acid but they were so inbensivel but they were still alive and when they touch someone they turn dead.But when it tuch Mars aliens they become dead too because they don't have Moon germs. So they tuch one of the Mars aliens but the Mars alien start melting. So all the Mars aliens ran away back to Mars but exept Ben and Josh because they were so so brave. So Ben said do you have any plan and Josh said nope but I wish I had. So Josh thought and thought and thought. I got it he said let's just scaer the aliens like we did and shot pepper spray. And Ben said good idea. So when they start runing torge them and they got so scared and they got ready for there pepper spray and when they peeked out he start spraying. But it didn't work they got backup o.k. now Ben and Josh was so scared so they used there jetpack and flew to Mars but Ben said is that JUPITER!!!!!!!!!!!! And Josh said ummmm yeah. And they were about to turn but they coulden't so they scream and Josh said this is scaryer than the Moon, got that right said Ben. So they scream so louder then a Trex. When they landed Ben said whats going on said Ben I don't know said Josh. This place gives me creaps. I know I know ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! what. A some kind of alien is on me. Alien what alien. Right in my back. I don't see it where? I was just kidding. Ohh because I was scared I tought I was blind. You think so, whep my plan worked sweet. Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr what? Dud this is a misson not play time it's misson time o.k. fine then. So what is the shituation said Ben I don't know? But you need to know the shituation at lease say one word and that is all you need to say o.k hello.......... well....... that is it. You should be smarter well oh yea how about you figure out the shituaion. Ben didn't say a word. Well that is what I thouth you don't know ether. Let's just find a way out of this place or shoud I say we are at JUPITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is wrong if you didn't went on the spaceship we woulden't go on this mess anyway I should not even be here because of you mr. I want to go to Mars. Well lets just forget about that and try to get out of here o.k. fine. But how? I know we can find someone and he or she can get us out of here. NO!!!! Why? Because remember we meet the Moon aliens oh yea. Dud lets just go.So how are we going to get out of here? Hey no more thoughs why because I want to get out of here and anyways this place gives me creeps I know. And why there is a shadow covering us. Wait that is our spaceship. So they call for help but they can't see them so they went to Satern. Wait I can't be stuck with this dude. I am going to eat Frutiy cherios and i am not going to share. But first I am going to give you a little present super texas wedgie atack lololoololololololololololololololololol

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