Sun (Final Peice)

by Mrs. Lovello's Winning Writers
in South Carolina

February 28th, 2008

Sun
Hot, boiling
Burning, Sweating, Sizzling
Tanning in the sun
Splashing, dropping, storming
Cold, wet.
Rain

(Praise & Comment)


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