the dinosoars attack barier Island (draft) by ,Ethan C

by Mrs. Lovello's Winning Writers
in South Carolina

April 25th, 2008

In a little town down on barrir Island there lived a little boy who loved dinosoars his name was Ethan and he really wanted to see a real dinosoar. It was his dream to see one but it was inpossible to see one.After all that comoshon Ethan trodded down to the ocean and wached the waves splash on the wet tall rocks.But then Ethan noticed that a rock was rolling onto the beach but then he just realized that rock was not a rock it was a t - rex!well his dream came true but now was the time to run. He ran until his heart was in his mouth and that t-rex wasn't the only one there was a whole pack of them .The t-rex knocked down tree's damaged building's and chased people can it get any worse than this.well his hunch was rite and it did get worse. His heart thumped and t-rex wasent the only dinosoar there there was ornithamimus, titanosoars, microraptors, tarosoars, mossoars, volosaraptor, and other amazing dinosaurs. As Ethan ran away from a fisty volosaraptor he triped over a tiny pebble and kicked the volosaraptor in the face when he tripped .After Ethan almost got killed he screamed and ran around in cercles.well that didn't help at all acually it dralled the dinosaurs closer to him. But atleast he was a fast runner he ran and ran until he went around the whole island 20 times!but the dinosaurs didn't run around it once so they can still have energy to run so Ethan sprinted into his home and he didn't come out until next morning. When morning rised he found dinosaurs sleeping on his roof and he was thinking how they got up there.when he tripped out of bed he slipped his closes on and trodded outside. A Brochiasaurs was standing outside and barly broke a eighty foot tall bilding.well that was close but look at that a iguanidon 30 feet long plant eater and a dagger like claw it's his faverite dinosaur. right then unotesed a volosirapter sneaked up and ran right into the iguanidon.


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I liked it alot Ethan

I liked it alot Ethan


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