Buttterfly

by Kate
in Maryland

March 30th, 2008

Bustling to be free
Cracking the Chrysalis
Bursting with life
Out emerges a butterfly
Each wing a delicate work of art
Fluttering away to the dangerous world beyond-
Now as a free independant spirit

So, what do you think?


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Lovely! _____________________

Lovely!
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"When life throws you lemons, throw them back!" - Joe Jonas

Borboleta!! the portuguese

Borboleta!! the portuguese word for butterfly! very good poem!

~your like the annoying little brother i never wanted~ what i tell my father alot. tis true.

Brilliant, and as light and

Brilliant, and as light and airy as a butterflies flight.

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Great Describing!

Great Describing!

thanks you guys! any thing

thanks you guys! any thing wrong with the poem? please tell me

Well if there was even one

Well if there was even one thing wrong, I'd say that it didn't flow enough...........

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