Aidan{14}

by Obi
in London

This chapter may be slightly short, sorry. Please comment! I'm dying to get over one comment!

Aidan Chapter 14

He took out his green, spiral bound notepad and wrote the title, The Angelos. He then wrote down a list of names and other text beside them:

The Angelos
Piper: Knowledge of all illegal subjects, small enough to fit into any place.
Hannah St. Ives: Martial artist, and brilliant designer and sewer/seamstress.
Joanna Lyon: Mechanical genius, can invent anything.
Kelly Brooks: Archery champion and arrow smith, and owns the Brooks Archery Course. Good for weapons of range.
Collie Ferns: Chemistry specialist and explosives expert.

It was a good plan, gather a group of able and dangerous kids to help save the day. It was a classic plan, that just might pull through. He had named it hastily after Angelo, and already had every detail in mind. The uniform, the weapons, the base, all was planned perfectly in his deviously clever mind. He grabbed his palmtop and clicked on the Safari Internet logo, he opened MSN and instant messaged Piper.

MSN Instant Messenger
Piper says: Hey What’s up?
Aidan says: I just had a brilliant idea!
Piper says: What now?
Aidan says: This may sound a little crazy, but we should like start an army to stop these people. I call them The Angelos!
Piper says: LOL
Aidan says: No really, we can do it and your part of it.
Piper says: Are you really serious?!?!
Aidan says: Hell yeah! I’ve got all the people down on a list! Each of them has a different special skill.
Piper says: How come I’m part of this?
Aidan says: You’ve got special skills, and illegal knowledge.
Piper says: LOL! By special skills you mean I’m small!
Aidan says: Well yeah………..
Aidan says: Well anyway, we need to get on with gathering the group. U gonna help.
Piper says: Yeah, I got good people connections. Just gimme the list of people .
(Aidan copy and pastes the list to the MSN)
Aidan says: The Angelos
Piper: Knowledge of all illegal subjects, small enough to fit into any place.
Hannah St. Ives: Martial artist, and brilliant designer and sewer/seamstress.
Joanna Lyon: Mechanical genius, can invent anything.
Kelly Brooks: Archery champion and arrow smith, and owns the Brooks Archery Course. Good for weapons of range.
Collie Ferns: Chemistry specialist and explosives expert.

( Piper prints the list out)
Piper says: Cool. I’ll get right on it!
(Piper logs out)


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Interesting... ______________

Interesting...
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"Live like you're at the bottom, even if you're at the top." - The Jonas Brothers

Hmmmm. Yeah, interesting. A

Hmmmm. Yeah, interesting. A little confusing again, and a bit strange, but anyways... Still good....

Hey, sorry I haven't

Hey, sorry I haven't commented in a while!
This is good, pretty good - I think you're making Aidan a bit too superhero-esque, though. Later on, maybe you should try giving him a bit indecision, hm?


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