John and the Haunted House

John and the Haunted House
by joshua Kendall

One day John went to the park. He saw a weird house with bats all over the place. John went inside the haunted house. He saw a trail of blood. So he followed the trail. When he got to the end. It was a locked door. John found a key on the floor. So he picked it up and unlocked the door. He went inside. There was a treasure chest. He couldn’t open it so he used the key and saw gold and jewelry. Boom, crash! “What was that?” John said. So he went to the attic and saw this man “Help me!” the man said. The man couldn’t walk, so John helped the man, took him out the door and took him home. Then John went back to the haunted house. He had to show the cops all the gold and jewelry. So John told the police about the man he found. So the police said come to the police station. The police showed him some pictures of men, John pointed at the man that he found. The police said he had been a criminal for 2 mouths. John got so mad that he pounded the table with his fist. John had to ride in the police car and showed the man’s house. They didn’t see a thing. Or even hear the sound of the TV. So they looked in his room. They opened the closet. They found money. It was a box full of 100- dollar bills. They went back to the police station with the box full of 100- dollar bills. They searched the man’s license plate. It was AVC-9219. They didn’t give up. John went back to his mom’s house and asked her if he could help the police officers. She said yes. So John went to the highway. They got out on exit 304. They stopped at a restaurant called chicago great when they got there, they found a car. They looked at the licenses plate real closely. It said AVC-9219. The police came out of the car. The suspect came out and ran. The police almost had him. So the other police drove and stopped the suspect and put him in handcuffs. They drove 35 miles back and went to the police station and put him in jail for 7 years. Than the police drove John back home and thanks to John the suspect has been captured. Two days later John got a check for 120 dollars. And what did John do with 120 dollars? He decided to give it to his mother because she was the one who let him go to help and plus she gave him the gas money. John was happy, then the police decided to give him a celebration.

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