Oasis chapter 1

by Kate
in Maryland

The wind blew softy on Lindsay, as her hair danced with it. She glanced back at her little town in California, where are her troubles melted away. She would be saying goodbye, even if it only was for six months.

She was pulled out of the cloulds as her Dad's soft voice said, "Ready Pumpkin? Got everything? C'mon up you go!" as he urged her to get on the boat. Finnaly, she gave in and stepped on the boat. When she did it was like entering a whole new world! People were playing music and kids were splashing in the outdoor pool. "Go on Honey, join them!" a voice behind her said. She whirled around to find her Mom wearing a bright orange dress. "Okay...." her voice trailed off. She walked up to a girl about her hieght, and about her age, 14. She was wearing plaid shorts and a short sleeve shirt that said 'Cali Girl'.

Lindsay walked up to herand said in her most cheerful voice, "Hi! My name is Lindsay! What is yours?"

The girl shot her a sour look, "Cory. why do you want to know?"

Linsay thought a minute, then replied,"I just wanted to meet someone and have a friend on this cruise. We'll be here for six months and I am not used to having no friends, and you are the only one here who looks my age. So what do you say? Can I sit down?"

Cory gave her another distant look then said, "whatever, America is a free country don't you know? You didn't need to ask."


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Do you not like it? A little

Do you not like it? A little short to be a chapter but still!

A person is a person no matter how small- Horton the elephant

Work on the quality of

Work on the quality of writing and the shortness, but overall I realy liked it. Especially the name Lindsay, great title to. Very good. Soon I'm gonna post a story so comment on that please?

Ordinary? Get away from me before I catch it, ugh!

oh my gosh kate i LOVE it!!!

oh my gosh kate i LOVE it!!! you better write more, and soon!!!

Thanks! I love all ur series

Thanks! I love all ur series though, way better than mine!

A person is a person no matter how small- Horton the elephant

you kidding me!!! I could

you kidding me!!! I could never write better than that!!! I mean seriously, the idea is GENIUS! The setting is STUPENDUS! The character is PERFECT! The writing is ABSOLUTELY SUPER DUPER DUPER!!! This should definetely be published... seriously!

Ha Ha Ha Ha! Are YOU

Ha Ha Ha Ha! Are YOU serious? LOL! Your writing should be published!

A person is a person no matter how small- Horton the elephant

have you read this over!!!!

have you read this over!!!! it is a master piece!!! things dont have to be long to be good and personally i like shorter things better. to me long things just go on and on and on where as short things its like I WANT MORE! as a good thing and yeah, what im saying is confusing. but anyways AWESOME JOB!

Thats not confusing, becuz i

Thats not confusing, becuz i agree!

A person is a person no matter how small- Horton the elephant

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