Blinded Sight; Chapter 1

by Cj
in a place where I can sing my heart out

This book will be replacing winged which was flawed. It's fantasy ina different way. /i will explain each new race as it comes along. I apologize to those who liked winged. I am using the land of my novel.
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Marke Kil Riversedge sat by the smooth stream that surrounded her village. Her long, chocolate brown hair spread out as she knelt down to look at her reflection. A double image appeared showing her dark blue eyes like pools of calm. She could her incantaitions and curses rising from the settlement of the Mage Clan Eros. Sighing she arose and returned to her choatic home. But even through the choas, joy and happiness were omipresent. "Marke! Time for your lessons!" called a feminine voice. "I'm coming," she replied telepathically.
When she reached the charm storehouse, her Mage Master, Jhadara Kahl stood in the doorway, ivory hair falling gracefully to her waist and coal black eyes reflecting wisdom. The Masters face was wrinkled with age, but shone with youthfulness. "Master," Marke murmered bowing in reverance. "Stand up child, you know I hate formalities." Placing a gnarled hand on her students back, Jhadara guided Marke into the store room explaining, "Each charm has it's own quality, you need to tell them apart."


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Somewhat confused

Somewhat confused overhere.
But I like the basis.
A bit crazy on the names are we? ;-)

(-; This comment right here might make or break a writer. I hope it doesn't break you, if it does... PITY ;-)

Sorry. I found some typos

Sorry. I found some typos I'll correct l8er. Hopefully before Obi-Wan come to critize me.

And I'm sorry I'm gettin' on your case,
But true friends they stab you in the face ~Superchic[k]

To late I'm

To late I'm here...........
It's a bit all over the place, but I kinda like it, your off the hook..........for now.....................

Ordinary? Get away from me before I catch it, ugh!


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