in Texas
May 1st, 2008
Stella
Chapter 1
My name is Stella, I am a wild horse. I live in the big mountains of Wyoming. I can't go to far away from my mother because there are mountain lions that can attack me. I am a young horse but I can walk, and run. I love to run. I wish I was in one of those races were you race other horses and I would beat them all, and I would win! But my mother says that I can't be trained for a race like that. I also wish that someone could take care of me, and love me, and ride me. My mother says "I will be the only one who will take care of you, and you will only belong to me." But I can do what I want to right? Right now I have to get some rest, tomorrow is going to be a long day. Tomorrow I have to move to a different part of the mountains 'cause these mountain lions live were we are living right now, and they can hurt us. They can hurt us real bad...
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This reminds me of that
This reminds me of that movie Spirit: Stallion of the Cimarron! I LUVED that!!! Is that where you got this story line from?
Awesome chapter! Continue! : )
KK, I LOVED that,
KK, I LOVED that, too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well, it seems that Stella is just recounting facts: I think you should try making it a bit more realistic :)