Adventure of the Valley - Chapter Two The Adventure Begins. PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT TO KNOW IF IT'S GOOD ENOUGH!!!!!!!

by The Nobody in

Chapter Two The Adventure Begins

John had a son called Orith. And Orith is the real main character in this story in which I love, Orith had some pretty queer adventures which I will and am going to show you. It began the day after John had met Diggin: Orith was climbing up the mountain that led to the valley with his brother, Dorca.
“We’er almost there!” called Dorca over his shoulder. “We’er almost to the top!!!” Indeed they were for the top was just ahead. Little did they know that this was the same trail it had traveled on to get into the valley, and little did they know that there was danger just on the other side of the mountain, and little did they know that an adventure was opening and they would not have a dull life anymore. Anyway I could keep on saying little do they know so on but I won’t because I’ve got to keep on writing.

The cold breeze whipped Orith’s face like an icy blade. Dorca stood next to him; peace flowed through Orith as the wind touched his cheeks.
‘Something is going to happen,’ thought Orith.
And as you know something was going to happen. Something great and terrible.
Suddenly Dorca slipped and fell down the sheer cliff they were standing on. Orith scrambled after him calling, “Dorca! Dorca!” and such as that type. But when Orith reached the bottom of the cliff he could not find Dorca. But of course Dorca is only a miner detail in the story.
“What thee looking for?” said a strange and unfamiliar voice. Orith turned to see a rabbit staring up at him.
“M-my brother,” replied Orith. “What are you doing?”
“ME!” cried the rabbit, somehow surprised that Orith would ask that question. “I’m what all the other respectable creatures are doing in this valley,”
“And what is that?” asked Orith.
“Hunting it! Of course!”
Orith had heard many a song and story of it, but he was not sure about it being real until now.
C-can I come? What’s your name…sir?”
“You can come. And my name is Billabee.” The rabbit turned and walked briskly toward some shrub, Orith hurried after him.

They went into a cave behind the shrub and Orith saw: ten mountain dwarves, nine rabbits, one dragon, four centaurs, ten bears, two ducks, one dog, three elves, five humans, and one-thousand fairies.
“Welcome to the army,” cried Billabee.