Pop 1 N.o. (READ THIS PLZ)

This is an old story of mine I submitted in parts. It is a very early effort of mine at writting stories, and so it's not very good. Here it is, edited, slightly changed and added on to, all the bits togeather. I thought newer members might like to read it. But after this, please forget Pop 1 N.o., The Sun Box 2, and testing. I can and WILL become a good Kidpub author.

The sun was rising. Lily woke. Sam started screaming. " AHHHHHHHHH!!!!! A BUG. YUK!!! Lil', get it OFF!!!!!!!!" Sam tripped and started giggling. "Little brothers," muted lil' "can be sooooo annoying." Sam was 5 and lily's little bro. Lily was 15 and had had enough of there’s a fake bug on my PJ's trick, which Sam had been doing daily for a week now. Lily went down stairs and put on the T.V. "The Simpsons. Great." said Lil'. That depressed her even more. If there was a T.V. show Lily hated it was the Simpsons. Lil' gave up on T.V. and went away to have breky. No Cornflakes. 'Well' thought lily ' I'll just have toast.'

"Math’s book, where you are?!" You know Lily was having a bad day. Now she couldn't find her book. "Late. Late again!" Lily shouted, even though you weren’t allowed to shout at school. "LILY! Mind your mouth." called principal Griffin. Lily hated being told off by the Principal. It damaged her ego as a hall moniter, even though she spent most of her time in detention already. What more could she need?! Lily was fed up already and now had an 'F' on her math’s homework. And detention. When the teacher had said "Detention. You’re just late TOO often." Lily had thought it would best to shut her mouth. After all, it could get her even more detention. Like she hadn't had enough detention all ready. But when she got an 'F' she spoke up. "This isn't fair. I deserve a pass! I study really hard." Well at least last night, she reminded her self. But that had not been a good idea. She now had 2 hours in detention. Lily was NOT looking forward to after school. She had Dancing Lessons with cool Miss Hannah, but that was canceled now. "Oh" said Lily as a thon came through her shoe. 'This is not a good day!' But she had know idea that some one, or should I say something waiting in detention......... And boy, was it good!!

Something, something was sparkling in Lily's hands. 'Wow' Lily breathed through her teeth. The 'SOMETHING' well, you could hardly call it a SOMETHING, was a ticket to Pop 1 N.o.'s concert tour. And, this WAS luck, because Pop 1 N.o. was Lily's fave band. Their song Pop One Number (Into the Charts) had zoomed to number 1 and stayed there for ten weeks. Lily began to sing their hit.
"Oh Oh Oh Oh Ohhhh,
Pop One Number!
Into the charts,
(Yeah, Yeah!)
Stay! 'till it reaches Number 1!
(Number 1!)
Lily was just getting into the groove of things when the Principal came in. She didn't stay long. The door slammed and Lil' herd her say, in an angered voice, "I hate that song! Ohhhhhh!" and burst into tears. 'Wow' thought Lily 'Is she touchy! Crying 'cause you don't like a song!' She was missing her dance class, and busting a move sounded like fun. It would be great to see her dance friends, too. To Lily's luck the window was open. She decided to make a run for it. It would be risky, but she would take her chances.

When Lily got home, it was too late to go to dance class. She went into the living room to find her brother hogging the TV, watching the Simpsons, eating cornflakes. THAT explained why she couldn't find them this morning. To her surprise her brother turned around and said "oh sorry Lil', I didn't think you would be home so early so I started watching the Simpson's, but now that you're home do you want to watch that OC. video of yours?" Then he went over to the video player and popped the video in. Lily was amazed.
Then, even more amazingly, Sam went over to the cupboard and put the Cornflakes away.
After that he got out HIS jelly. 'Great' Lily thought,’ now he won't share that'. But to her surprise he went over to get another bowl and halved the jelly. Then he gave a bowl to her. While she was sitting eating jelly, Lily remembered the Pop 1 N.o. ticket. She went up to put it in her room. As she came down the stairs she saw her mum come in.

"Who wants home-baked cookies?" her mum asked. But Sam replied "we just had jelly, Mum".
'Perfect' Lily thought; now he's ruined our chances of that. But her mum was quick to say "oh, it doesn't matter" and hand them three each.
When Lily went to sleep that night, she had beautiful dreams. Decorating the sun with rubies, she was a fairy. Making flowers pink. Doing fairy things. Eating fairy food.
So naturally, when Lily woke up she was happy. She had Cornflakes and toast with jam for breakfast. She had a good hair day. Her favorite jeans (which she never got a chance to iron) were ironed. She left for school.
But, of course, she left the ticket behind.......

Dear Diary,
It all happened wrong. AHHHHHHHH!!! Every thing was BAD, BAD and WORSE!!!!!!!!! I got an 'F', again!! My fave jeans are ripped!
Love,
Lily aka Sad

Dear Diary,
I took the ticket to school today, just to prove I had one. Theses tickets are, like, $200 or something. So everyone loved it. And then an "A". Something’s going on here.............
From,
Lily aka Confused.

Lily was working things out. She knew that the tic was lucky. She was faced with a challenge. 'Oh NO!' was Lily secret thought. She didn't even write it in her diary.

The Pop 1 N.o. ticket was in Lily's hands, and Lily was concentrating hard on it. Should she take the ticket to school, or not? "Lily!" shouted Sam, "Your gonna make us late!" Without thinking, Lily shoved the ticket in her pocket, grabbed her backpack and ran down the stairs on to the School Bus. She was hunting for a seat, when Jill, Lily's friend from dance called out, "Sit here" Lily ran over and sat down. "Jill, sorry I wasn't dancing yesterday I" "Ahhhhhhhhh!" the roar of the bus was terrible, It all happened in a few seconds.

Dear Diary,
Today was scary. We all got sent home after the bus crashed. I'm Okay, but Sam and Jill are unconscious!! Just as I thought the ticket was lucky, it gave me a car crash, or bus crash!! I’m so confused, and there’s no-one to tell!! I’ve got three options. I can get rid of the ticket, keep it, or use it to go to the connect and I’m stuck. What can I chose?
Love Lil

Terror reigned on Lil from that moment on. She failed all her tests and flunked all her homework assignments, lost her position as a hall monitor (“you’re in detention too much” said grumpy Griffin.) got a new dance teacher who was not at all like cool Miss Hannah, and her friends didn’t even stir in their comas.

In the end, Lily sold the ticket and gave the money to the hospital where her friends slept on. Things instantly looked up. Her friends awoke, she was got her hall monitor badge back because she was so thoughtful donating all that money to a hospital, and Miss Hannah had a delay in moving to Scotland so she came back to teach them again for a while. All in all, she lived happily after that.