I NEED HELP PLEASE COMMENT I WANT TO KNOW IF I SHOULD WRITE THIS OR NOT

by Elias
in Maia (my made up world)

An army is rising
Love is begging
War is starting.

The story is about a man (a nineteen year old) who is brought to the army, and he dies but his spirit rises up into the air and he searches the towns and he finds a boy named Xlim, and brings him up into the sky and it's about Xlim's life in the clouds and it's also about the little thing I wrote at the top of the page.


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More info buddy If you don't

More info buddy

If you don't like it, suck it up.

I agree with Calla & Cami

I agree with Calla & Cami (whichever one it is) I need more information on it before I can say anything.

I'm with them ~ Sing like

I'm with them

~ Sing like theres no tomarrow. Dance like no ones watching. Speak like no ones there. In other words express yourself. ~

I'm with them ~ Sing like

I'm with them

~ Sing like theres no tomarrow. Dance like no ones watching. Speak like no ones there. In other words express yourself. ~

me too

me too


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