Too Much To Comprehend 3

by Berinna(Kira)
in reading TWILIGHT... AGAIN!!!

HI- someone posted a comment. "Meeting Maury"? So here I am about to give his side of everything. Let me tell you something though, for those of you who read the Maximum Ride books, Blake is similar to Fang, not that I'm copying James Patterson.

MAURY-

Maury sighed as he sat in the same place his cousin sat. Except for the similarities of being twin cousins, he had pimples, and shaggy brown hair. Other than that (he's a nerd too), he was okay. Why cant I just be friends with Casey (casey was his girlfriend)? he wondered. He started as his aunt called for lunch. 'Sienna!" she called. "Sienna?" He heard muffled speaking and then the scrape of a chair. He saw Blake head to his- wait- Sienna's room. What is he doing?

He got up and went to the kitchen. "Oh. Hello Maury." He smiled ever so slightly. For lunch, there was caviar and fruit. As a question for readers, who in the world eats caviar for lunch? Anyway, Maury sat at the place where the fruit was. "Sorry, Maury. I forgot you were allergic to caviar. But Blake suggested it- and fruit- and he's the guest, not to mention you too." Blake suggested?

Blake talks? Who knew? People always thought he was a mute, someone who never spoke. He speaks? What is with the never ending questions?! Maury rubbed his temples. He was totally freaked. He felt sleepy too. Must be jet lag. Took a toll on him. He pushed away his plate and lied his head on the table. Wait until sleep comes, he thought...


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first alittle advice: Keep

first alittle advice: Keep in Sienna's point of view. Maury's was alittle confusing.
Overall performence: Very well. I really enjoy this book.
Title: Too Much To Comprehend (Sorry, it's hard coming up with a title for this.)

i like the title, thanx. It

i like the title, thanx. It was a little hard to do because he has mixed feelings in new surroundings and around our gender. Therefore, he is a little weak.
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