The Adventures of Iron Man

The Adventures of Iron Man
by Domenic C.

One day Tony Stark was at a conference with his directors. They were discussing about the Iron Man project. Then Pepper called. Tony answered his cell phone. Pepper starts to scream help, so Tony goes to get the Hulk Buster suit and flies off. Then he sees the evil Iorn Monger suit. How could this be, thinks Tony, I defeated it last year. It was Rhode Pepper faking it. Rhode wanted to show Tony the Monger suit that he made. It's a cool blue suit that can withstand all elements and has a stealth ability like the Iron Striker. Tony goes back to the meeting, but the building was destroyed by the huge Mr. Moushey and the Tylernator. What he didn't know is that they were rising up behind him. Then Mr. Moushey kicked Stark in the back and went flying into the Sears Tower. Then Tylernator blew Tony into the next building, but the Hulk Buster blew a huge super cannon right into Tylernator and Mr. Moushey. Then he launched one of his laser missiles at the super cannon and BOOM! It blew up in their faces. Their heads came off. They were cyborgs. Then the person that created them appeared. "You'll regret destroying them." Then a ship appeared. It's big too. Then its cannon fires! Boom Tony goes blasting into the sky heading right for the blast. Then he curves off to the left and the blast hits the ship. BOOM! It explodes. Then a pod ejects from the ship, but Tony shoots it down. If the pod was empty, where was the person he detected on his radar? Right behind him! Then he turns around. Nothing, but somebody says help me. I need water so you can see me. Tony squirted water on the thing. It was an alien lifeform. The alien told Tony he came out of a vortex and was captured by the Madirain. The Madirain he's alive? Yes. I thought I destroyed him. Nope you didn't. He's back and stronger, a lot stronger. Darn, then I need the xzero3 prototype. It's like the astrosuit but its reactor core can go into a small nuclear explosion to destroy his lair. It's only strong enough to destroy a gigantic castle. When the suit explodes you think it'll kill me, but you're wrong. The suit can regenerate itself from atoms to normal. Where's his lare at? In the Himalayas. At Mount Kilamanjaro. Where, inside the mountain? Yes, says Zimlik. So Tony goes to the beach and then gets the xzero3 prototype. Then he zooms off to Mount Kilamanjaro. Then he finds the Mandirains lair, but what he saw was horrifying. He saw two teenagers trying to fight the Mandirain, but he was so powerful he demolished then to their bones. Then all of Tony's enemies showed up. Then he fired a repolsure shoot at Caricar (aka Carcar). She went flying into a big wall, jumped down, and then hit Tarytar into Caricar. Then OS came and digitized right into my suit. She tried to hack. Boom, the fire wall got her and she went way into the sky and blew up into millions of digits. Then she reformed and came crashing down. Then the Shaggy dog came, grabbed my leg and tossed me into the sky. Then I got him to go get Madirain's rings. He did but failed. He went into the castle IOR. The only one that was left was Madirain, so I crashed right into him. Then I opened the reactor and BOOM! I went nuclear. I destroyed the Madirain and the castle. The end for now......

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Very nice! Advice: Try not

Very nice!

Advice: Try not to use too many short sentences at once.

Otherwise, this is really good! : )


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