'Meeting the prez!'

by Kate
in Mcdonalds ordering a three peice #9, to go please.

May 23rd, 2008

Today i went to mt.vernon from 6:00 am to 4:00 pm. It was so cool! But while i was there i got an idea for a story! These kids are sent back in time and go to Mt.Vernon to help Goerge washington at his death bed, and be his assistant through out the war! Thiis is kinda lame, but you know me! Tell me what you think also i will need a title change, cuz, as u can see, "Meeting the president" isnt that good.Read and comment!


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what about "My life as a

what about "My life as a Revolutionist"

Sounds

Sounds exciting!
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"Live like you're at the bottom, even if you're at the top." - The Jonas Brothers

interesting, but a little

interesting, but a little cliche. perhaps making a backstory would help you about the kids. Like a more personal problem the kids have to solve. I don't have any ideas for a title.... sorry!

Danger - Fear = Excitement
Happiness + Time = Peace

Sounds good! Check out these

Sounds good! Check out these titles:
George Washington On the Death Bed
Sucked Back In Time
Mt. Vernon History

[Ron said,] "Look, let me go back and hit Percy!"
"No," [Hermoine] answered firmly.
"It'll make me feel better!"

Ron and Hermoine in HP 6

It is pretty nice. But like

It is pretty nice. But like Claudia said, it is pretty cliche. I think one the kids in your kids group doesn't like history. That would be fun! And maybe a title:
Revolution Fever
I dunno.

-Have a Stagilicous Day!-

I think its really cool! Go

I think its really cool! Go for it!

I guess it is a little

I guess it is a little cliche but, yeah........

RILEY


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