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Maryam in A Land Of Desert And Sun |
All right. I can walk up to Liam Rheston and sit next to him on the bus. Though my common sense and every nerve ending is screaming the opposite, I force myself with a pinched, wary face (it even feels that way to me, and I'm on the inside of it) that is also bent (I'm wearing a hat with a pretty wide brim; all the luckier) to walk slowly up the aisle on the bus.
Wow. I can't help comapring this to walking down the real aisle. The REAL one, instead of the one in the middle of the bus.
All right. Big breath.
I pause, falter, and with a final glance at the boy stormily frozen into place, and, with a sudden motion that bursts out of me,
I ull away.
My heart is racing, and my breathing had quickened audibly, as I sink into a bench safely three rows away from Rheston's. I get a few angry looks from those next to me I have unmercifully squished, but I don't care.
I sigh, and lean back.
This is going to be a serious problem.
I can already tell.
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I love indianna invincible!
I love indianna invincible! I was reading it before i even got Kidpub! Its on of my favourite stories! PLEASE KEEP GOING!! XD
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friends are like slinkies-- they make u smile when you push them down the stairs friends are also like potatoes -- when you eat them, they die
Maryam, PLEASE i BESEECH
Maryam, PLEASE i BESEECH you. LONGER chapters. PLEASE. ;)
Still good though, even if it's not you at your best
There are three rules for writing a wonderful novel. Unfortunally, no one knows what they are.
Poetry is when your heart bleeds ink on paper.
Aww. I was kinda
Aww. I was kinda wishing Indie WOULD go and sit next to Rheston. I’d love to eavesdrop on their conversation- if I were there, that is. LOL. Can’t wait for more, as usual.
Though, of course, there are some minor grammar errors – more like typo errors, actually: comapring – and, um – ‘ULL away’. I think you meant comparing and – ‘pull away’.
LOL- I need more or I’ll die! Eek!
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Cass: Thank you so much!
Cass: Thank you so much! Here's proof to myselfthat people from outsaide actually read it!! Thank you!!! :D
Calla: Yeah, i know. LOL, it's just that I'm not getting as much tiime on the computer as I usually do. Also, here at the library, where I'm writing this, the menu is going over like half the page, and I'm typing half this without knowing what it is I'm saying....
Susmi: Ohhhh, don't WORRY. Our dear Indy has not given up yet! I'll give you guys a spoiler: She will talk to Rheston. Very soon... *evil grin*
Now, I' m deciding whether or not to write a chappie on Word that's also on the computer, then copy-paste it on here....
But I'll be at my aunt;s house (SHE HAS A COMPUTER, AND THEIR TRIP TO HAWAII BEGINS TODAY, AND WE'RE HOUSE-SITTING FOR THEM!!! YAY!!) and, also, I have the 3rd Max Ride on hold, but I came here just to see what was new (and THREE COMMENTS, you guys! Thanks!). Also, I'm meeting Haley again! And we will speak of Twilight! I finished all three, btw...
*robotic voice*Details on next meeting shall be posted shortly . 'bbye, everyone.
The secret to good writing? Just tend to skip WRITING the parts readers tend to skip READING.
LOL, house-sitting? Cool!
LOL, house-sitting? Cool! And the double (goodness! Wowie!) visit with Maron- super cool! You guys are way lucky!
You finished ALL three of the Twilight saga? Goodness. I’m on the third. It’s awesome- I love it- and I’m craving for MORE! Breaking Dawn, that is. -Anyways, have a good time at your aunt’s home!
Oh, and I read the next chapter already, so I thought I’d post my comments here itself:
It was awesome, as usual, and it clearly is one of your best. You’ve described every tiny detail – so it makes the reader feel like she’s right THERE, watching Indiana roll over pathetically in her bed. LOL. So, it was good – can’t wait to read the next chapter!
P.S.: How’re you getting on with Paira, then? You have it saved on your USB or something? (If you remember, it says clearly on your messenger’s message that you’re going to finish Paira in the summer hols…)
I know! I'm so glad I got to
I know! I'm so glad I got to meet her twice, we talked about lots of stuff!!
Yeah, in about five days. LOL, my sis read the first one, and she';s now fawning over Rob Pattinson and how he's perfect for Eddie. *exasperated sigh*
Haha, thanks. I like writing well!!!
I BROUGHT MY LAPTOP!!! :D
Actually we haven't begun the house-sitting yet. I'm at my OTHER aunt's. Long story...
AND SIGN IN!!
The secret to good writing? Just tend to skip WRITING the parts readers tend to skip READING.
Oooh- you met for the
Oooh- you met for the 2nd time already? I thought you were going to do that soon. LOL, how was the ‘Twilight Talk’?
God, you’re a fast reader. It’s 2 weeks already, and I haven’t finished. At least I’m on the last one, hehe. Actually, I do think Rob’s perfect for Edward. I totally agree with your sis. Kat thinks Rob has too much lipstick on in the trailer; she didn’t like the choice for Edward. LOL.
What did you think of Kirsten for Bella? She’s perfect, isn’t she?! God, Edward and Bella are SO cute together… who do like more: Edward or Jacob?
Oh- and do you think Bells SHOULD stay human or – not? LOL, I have loads of questions, I adore the story!
I’m spending my time reading them now…
Ooh, lucky! I couldn’t – sigh. My mom is SO restricting sometimes..
You’re at your OTHER aunt’s? HOW MANY AUNTIES DO YOU HAVE?! LOL…
*sigh*
Like I said, I can’t.
No messenger.
Boo.
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Yeah! It was good! We both
Yeah! It was good! We both think Jacob is better for her. I still like Edward, though.
Yeah. Just now (it was why I couldn't reply to this sooner!!!) she comandeered the computer in her time-honored fashion and officially became an obsessed adoring-Rob fanatic. Yeah, i think he';s very good for Edward, too.
And two, actually.
Aw, NUTS! Too bad!!
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Rod is friggin' ugly. Jacob
Rod is friggin' ugly.
Jacob is friggin ugly to. And a but. Who thinks that bella should leave the perfect man for him.
He sucks.
And he dies in Breaking Dawn. Trust me.
Mmm. Okay. I won't take your
Mmm. Okay. I won't take your word for it, though; Bella might become a vampire and then, due to her change in appearance, Jacob imprints on her,
LOL!! Just an idea!!!!
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