Delia A question.

by Berinna(Kira)
in reading TWILIGHT... AGAIN!!!

Do u think I should continue this? commet ur answer


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well im not trying to be

well im not trying to be mean or anything but i do not understand a few things.  like the last chapter.  maybe you should try to put in more detial.

 

 

 

~ Sing like theres no tomarrow. Dance like no ones watching. Speak like no ones there. In other words express yourself. ~ *You don't have to see to believe. Just believe to see.* -(Bran)- Be your own person. Not what others want you to be.-

WELL I lOVE THE FIRST 5

WELL I lOVE THE FIRST 5 CHAPTERS though the the first two are the best by farr i think you should keep going with this! Its really good! but who are the tree folks and what happened in the last chapter? well anyways you are a really good writer keep going!

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