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Benjamin in A place so far from were I want to be... |
He jumped up, and looked at his house. It was ablaze and starting to fall apart...
He heard a muffled cry from the centre of the room, and jumped into the flames. His arm was badly burned, but he didn’t notice as he saw the huddled body of his sister...
Henry could see a trickle of shining-white-water flow from Asher’s chest, to Sally’s...
Sally saw a 2nd story window smash, and a body was thrown out of it. Her mother came crashing to earth, landing in the rosemary bush. Her hair was nearly all burnt off, and her face was badly burnt. Asher came crashing out into the garden, after her. He landed on the grass with a sickening crunch...
Blood leaked into the corner of henry's vision… and then all was black.
Part 5... be ready.
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What? that's not fair. You
What?
that's not fair. You left us hanging....
Very good though. When I read something suspencful, I get a blast of adrenaline. Now I'm uber hyper. I have you to thank for that. ;)
So lock the windows, and bolt the doors. Cuz I've got enough problems without creating more! ~Relient K Devastaion and Reform
yeah i agree with calla, you
yeah i agree with calla, you left us hanging but i guess it's a good thing/....i guess...maybe i mean i want to know what happens next!! lol
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"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, today is the present that's why they call it a gift." -- my RE teacher and that kung foo turtle
Just to say, this isn't the
Just to say, this isn't the next bit... I just pulled bits out of chapter 5, to build suspence (or try 2)
Love.
A profoundly tender, passionate affection for another person.
I still don't get it...
Great. now I had to post
Great. now I had to post chapter 5 early, and this is waisted. ah well... it's still good.
Love.
A profoundly tender, passionate affection for another person.
I still don't get it...