 | by
Kate in Maryland |
ok, let me know if u like it!
"We have to go! Brooke, run faster! The page will clase on you!" Julia yelled, louder than she ever had before.
Brooke took a big step, and leaped across the seam of the book and into the next page.
As the dream suddenly faded away, Brooke woke up in a cold sweat. She voilently shoved the covers off her short legs. She got out of bed andand tried to walkacross her bedroom floor without tripping over any of the scatterd books that were spred out across the wooden florr.
As she stepped into the bathroom, she felt the cold tiles touch her feet. She reached over the counterto turn on the light, and stared at her reflectoin. Her (normally) stick-straight deep brown hair was a mess of knots and tangles. Her eyes, which were normally a crystal clear blue, were now a faded colorless shade of gray.
"Oh my gosh!"
So do u like it so far? lemme know!
See more stories by Kate
This is good. Pleaze
This is good. Pleaze continue. :)
It matters not how strait the gate, How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul.
Cool! Some errors and stuff,
Cool! Some errors and stuff, but I like it so far. Post more.
". . .a roadtrip through the land of Lean Beef. . ."
--Some random radio ad.
Yeah it sounds really good
Yeah it sounds really good but you wrote : the page will clase,
she got out of bed andand
spred across the wooden florr
there might have been more, i dunno but otherwise this was really great! sounds interesting :)
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, today is the present that's why they call it a gift." -- my RE teacher and that kung foo turtle
Yeah it sounds really good
Yeah it sounds really good but you wrote : the page will clase,
she got out of bed andand
spred across the wooden florr
there might have been more, i dunno but otherwise this was really great! sounds interesting :)
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, today is the present that's why they call it a gift." -- my RE teacher and that kung foo turtle
Oh this is good stuff I have
Oh this is good stuff I have a hunch where this is going. Awesome job anyway! Oh and not to be an Obi or anything but just a few re-typs. I do it all the time.
I'm different and proud. I'm strange and I like it. I'm weird and it ROCKS! Being normal cramps my style. If I'm never strange then I can't do anything. WEIRD PEOPLE RULE!! If you know me... than your different. Being strange is your life.
Thanks guys! And thanks
Thanks guys! And thanks for pointing out all those typos! I didnt know i was that bad!
I will try to do better in the future. Thanks!
"Silent gratitude isn't much use to anyone"-Gladys Brown (Also the thought of the day)
really good kate!!
really good kate!!
Thanks
Thanks Smiley!!
"Silent gratitude isn't much use to anyone"-Gladys Brown (Also the thought of the day)
nice! will follow this one!
nice! will follow this one! yeah, it's great when people follow your stories. I for one am writing a horror story called Grave. it has just started, snd you may like it *coughreadgravecough* sorry, just the cough I have *coughreaditnowcough* yeah... *coughitisthebestcough* *coughgogravecough* that's better...
Love.
A profoundly tender, passionate affection for another person.
I still don't get it...
Thanks! And i get get your
Thanks! And i get get your message
!
"Silent gratitude isn't much use to anyone"-Gladys Brown (Also the thought of the day)