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Chapter 2
As she paced her room like the caged tigers she had seen in
Jiggling the doorknob, the intruder found it locked, and let loose a stream of colorful language. Pressing her ear momentarily to the door, Marke heard a gun cock. Gasping she pressed herself against the doorframe as a bullet neatly detached the lock. Kicking the door open the pirate stepped into the room. The free-swinging door, however, knocked the wind out of the lady. Biting her tongue to prevent the angry words from tumbling out, she slipped into step behind the thief.
The young man mused aloud, “What is worth guarding in here?” The Irish accent sounded familiar…
Pressing the dagger against his back, Marke threatened, “Move, and you die.”
The cold steel pressed into his back, almost cutting, but not quite. He thought for a solution. “It’s just a girl, she probably is holding a fountain pen to my back…”
Whirling around he twisted the weapon from her hand grasped it in his and pressed it to the back of her neck. Looking down, his eyes widened in surprise.
“Marke?”
Her eyes also grew, “Kain?”
*Note to reader: I changed Ian’s name to Kain, which means Warlike.
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Okay, cool. Kind of moving
Okay, cool. Kind of moving -actually WAY moving- too fast, but it's still good I guess. Again, I like Poet of Darkness better . . .
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Wait, hope, and write more poetry.
-What I tell Kavalnain
great! i love the caged
great! i love the caged tigers bit, great description
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Alice: "No one will dare to call you plain when I'm through with you." Bella: "Only because they're afraid you'll suck their blood."