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Author Chelsea in a state of wanting to believe... |
August 19th, 2008
I am going to write a novel about a girl named Jennifer who is daughter to a surpeme leader of the Army of Hellhoppers. The beginning starts out when she is getting ready for the most significant day of the year; the day she sees her father. She can only see her father once every year. At the ceremony they get attack by a squad called the Eilte Commandos. Jennifer fainted in the conflict. She couldn't breathe because she was wearing a corset. (No one can breath properly in a corset) She wakes up in some Miltary Fort and STILL couldn't breathe. The squads leader Troy slices the corset off of her. She was too dazzed to figure out what had happened.
When she was strong again, Troy tells her that they are Elite Commando. But they were Jennifer's enemy... Troy tells her that she has to see their General who isn't a happy guy. When she does talk to him, all he wants is a necklace that she possess. She said that she wouldn't give the neck lace to them. The General got upset and ordered his guards to imprison her. While in an imprisonment, the General comes in when she is sleeping and injects something into her. But then he realizes that he injected the wrong thing. He injected something that made her ninja-like. She can only be in ninja mode at night. Until it is sprung off and she is imprisoned like this forever. Since she had brillint powers, she couldn't but them to waste.
The Elite Commandos get word that they are banished from the army and they are on the list of targets. The whole Army of Heroes are after them. Can they stay alive until they reach the end of the war? Or will the Army of Heroes destroy them before it's all over?
I don't know what to name this? I thought all last night about it and I still can't figure out what to title it? Please comment and tell me what you think I should name it.
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This sounds like it would be
This sounds like it would be a very fun and interesting novel to write. I dont exactly know a name, but something involving Jennifer, Hellhoppers, and maybe something involving ninja's or a quick creature.
I can't wait to read this though, when you post!
This is...a very interesting
This is...a very interesting plot and sounds like a cool story...so...lets see what I can think up here...
Sounds VERY interesting
Sounds VERY interesting maybe...
1. Ninja among the Elite
2. Jennifer in Shadow
3. Jennifer at Night
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Thank you to everyone that
Thank you to everyone that commented and once I get alot of opitions I will pick one and thank the person that came up with it.
Thank you Kidpubbers, Chelsea
I don't know exactly, but
I don't know exactly, but you could do something to do with owls. Sleeping and pretty much harmless at day, swift and silent hunter at night. No exact names right now.
I"VE GOT A JAR OF DIRT!!!! I'VE GOT A JAR OF DIRT!!! AND GUESS WHAT'S INSIDE IT!!!!!!-Jack Sparrow, Pirates of the Caribbean:Dead Man's Chest
lol sounds so awesome...but
lol sounds so awesome...but why can she only see her dad once a year??
please write it
btw i love the name jennifer :)
From A Very Non-Vampiric Friend, Kanga :)
The reason she could only
The reason she could only see her father once ever year is because he is the Leader of the Army of the Hellhoppers. He is too busy in leading his troops that he doesn't have everyday to see his daughter. I hope I made that clear now!
-Chelsea "Born with nothing, Die with everything..."