"The Unlikely Hero" Chapter 1

by Brandon
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Poseidon sat on the marble steps in front of his clay house on the sandy beaches of the crusade mountains.. He was daydreaming of all the heroes he ever learned of, and trying to picture himself as one of them. Poseidon couldn't see himself as a hero at all. Nobody could see him as a hero.
Poseidon was an average 14 year old god living in the cloudy city of the gods, Mount Olympus. At this particular moment Poseidon was sitting at the marble steps in front of his house daydreaming . He was awoken with a slight tap on the shoulder by his friend, Athena. Everything about Poseidon was ordinary and average, except for one thing. His power over water. He could do amazing things with water.
Poseidon had just come out of a tent. The tent happened to belong to the storyteller in the great city of Olympus. He supposedly told stories about the future of the children in the village. He was told by the storyteller mere minutes before that he would one day become a great god and rule from the skies alongside all other gods. This was not the only evidence of heroism in Poseidon.
When Poseidon was born the storyteller told a story about Poseidon having a great and complex future. Poseidon couldn't picture himself as a hero at all. Him, Poseidon, the average ordinary 14 year old god , a hero? How could it be?


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Nice opening!

Nice opening!

The name Brom reminds me of

The name Brom reminds me of the story Eragon's Brom. did you take the name from there? Btw, the story is beggining to sound good. I wud wanna see the next chapter definetly.

Well, thats where I got it

Well, thats where I got it from. I think its a cool name. Brom will be the name for now. It will probably change to something different.

Why did you repeat yourself

Why did you repeat yourself so much? This is okay, but I think you should get a different name, so you don't steal from Eragon or whatever.

By the way, you can't keep

By the way, you can't keep changing all the things in your story. First you changed the title, like you said in the notes, and now your going to change the name. It's just like you can't make up your mind or something.

YA no wat. I didn't change

YA no wat. I didn't change the title. So don't dis my stories! no offense.

I didn't think you changed

I didn't think you changed the title. But you should really change the name. Try turning a name around backwards and then tweaking it. Thats what i did in my story!!

sounds coolIll try it out!

sounds coolIll try it out!


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