 | by
Kodokami in Texas |
May 28th, 2007
*Just a little poem I thought up the other day. It's short, and I might add another verse or so, if I happen to think of some more. But I like it for now, at least.*
What's the point of honey
If there were not any bees?
What's the point of beauty
If it was not a bit thorny?
With sweetness and beauty
Comes bitterness and pain
So what's the point of loving
If you knew it would not rain?
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This is TERRIFIC! Seriously,
This is TERRIFIC! Seriously, it is. Normally, I don't really like short poetry, but yours is very good 'cause it rhymes and mixes and matches. I kinda understood the last two sentences, but they were really moving along to the poem. Good work.
great/ I hope u write
great/ I hope u write another verse not because this one cant stand alone, but i would enjoy readinmg more. good work
I really like this, and I am
I really like this, and I am surprised that you have not written another verse. But it stands beautiful alone, so dont bother.
i love it! this is beautiful
i love it! this is beautiful (without any thorns)
Your talent exceeds me!!! :
Your talent exceeds me!!! : )