in Mount Olympus
Author's Note: Comments appreciated!
Queen Petulia sat on her throne, deep in thought. She had to know: was the Dream God tricking her? Or was a Midnight Scroll necessary?
Why would Dream God trick me? she chided herself. Yes, she thought. It is necessary.
But what had the Dream God said? All she could remember was "...you must have a midnight scroll..." But who was supposed to write it? She racked her brain. Nobody came up.
Who would be the one to save their kingdom?
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weeeeeeeeell... i don't
weeeeeeeeell... i don't think it's dramatic enough. IMO, i think Petulia should be like thinking deeply about it , not just all of a sudden 'go find'. especiallly sice it's so important; the kingdom depends on this!
yeah, same commentb as
yeah, same commentb as Maryam though you should make the proluge a little bit larger (wee bit!!!) remember!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (do u lyk Harry Potter books?)
OK, maybe next time I'll ask
OK, maybe next time I'll ask for positive comments...although I should be prepared for criticism... yes I like harry potter but I'm not obsessed.
true, i'll edit it...read it
true, i'll edit it...read it when i'm done.
I took your guys' advice and
I took your guys' advice and now it is new and improved! (Still short though)
Personaly I'm not one for
Personaly I'm not one for fairies but who CARES? Anyway I think this has a potentional of being GREAT! I just don't really get the prolouge that much...
Hmmm--- yeah, MUCh better
Hmmm--- yeah, MUCh better Maddy. Good work...(though sum parts i do not really get...)
Yeah, I am commenting now,
Yeah, I am commenting now, but I read the first onne. I don't like faires really, but I do have a really cool Fairies Encyclopidie, so I am willing to be open minded!