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do you think I should publish When Men Were Men

do you think I should publish When Men Were Men

Yes!
80% (4 votes)
No
20% (1 vote)
Total votes: 5
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-------------- hi Wolverine of WHACK just posted. have you read redwall??

Posted by Jack on Wed, 06/02/2010 - 17:19
I'm really sorry I said no.

I'm really sorry I said no. You should publish it in the longrun and I love the story, but you really need to work on punctuation, capitalization, and spelling. I think you just need and editor *cough-me-cough*.

~EmmaR

Posted by Angel of Arumdin on Wed, 06/02/2010 - 19:33
thats okay, If I do get it

thats okay, If I do get it published I will edit it some more

 

-------------- hi Wolverine of WHACK just posted. have you read redwall??

Posted by Jack on Wed, 06/02/2010 - 21:30


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