2010 Writers Contest/Bananas & Cream (JULIA)/ Round 2
in None of your business!
February 16th, 2010
My Dream Pet
Bananas & Cream
I hear through the wooden door,
the lightest footsteps upon the floor.
Eagerly I wait,
for my new pet not second too late.
The door knob turns.
For my new dog that I yearn
is finally about to enter
my heart, right in the dead center.
I can not wait, I help pull open the door,
to see a petite creature, the colors of smores.
The whites, the browns all tied together,
Its softness is greater then a feather's.
I reach for my new friend,
the one that I will love 'till the very end.
And years and years passed that time,
my new dream pet will always be mine.
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I am not a poet, I know
Neither am I
This is actually very good, with a bit more practise I think you could be a poet... I loved the lines "The whites, the browns all tied together/ Its softness is greter than a feather's." It creates a very visual image, well in my mind at least...
`Be wary, young one, beyond this page lives a dangerous sort of magic...`
Thank you lone wolf. But yours is much better