in Ohio
November 29th, 2007
When I moved to Belzham's Apartments, my life changed. There were,of course,the bad changes,such as not having a yard. However,there were good changes too,and the best change was Zach.
Zach had wild ideas, and was always ready for fun. He told crazy jokes,made amazing sketches,and ran super-fast.Soon Zach and I were best friends.{We had a pact signed in real blood to proove it.}
It was the summer after fifth grade when we were torn apart.I remember that day clearly.Zach and I were creating a plan for a city. It had six arcades,three theme parks,and eleven skate parks. Just us.Not any other way.
That night Zach had a heart attack and died. It was Molly,his sister,who broke the news to me.About a month later Molly and I started hanging out.Now we're best friends.
You know,"any other way" isn't so bad.
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