BEAR
by Mrs. Hackett's Fifth Graders
in Georgia
December 18th, 2007
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in Georgia
December 18th, 2007
there was a bear
who loved to go to the fair.
THE END
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omg thats the best poem ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!joe
It's pretty good, but if you can you should add more stanzas saying like, why he went to the fair, what it was like at the fair, you know what I mean. Other then that, Great writing!