Benny the Ballon
in Illinois
March 27th, 2009
Once ther was a ballon stand outside of the sears tower and there was a red ballon naned Benny. He was very adventureous but he couldint go aneywhare because he was tied to the cart. But one day he got loose and flew away through Chicago. First Flew up the Sears Tower. He was relly high and he wanted to get down. Then a big woosh of wind pushed him towrds a tower that was smaller then the sears tower but was still big. Then he flew dow to the ground where the tower was. The real name was the Jhon Hancock bulding and not far away from the Hancock bulding you could see a very old tower called the water tower. It said that this tower surived the Great Chicago Fire. Next he flew for a mile and all that time he could just see stores. Benny didnt like to go to department stores so he didnt like that. Next he flew into a art gallry that was out side. There he saw a silver bean a weird concert center and satues that spit out water. Benny wanted to eat the bean but he found out it was a metal statue. Next he was pushed to a base feld that said "Wriggly Feild Home To The Cubs". Wow!!!!!! I love the cubs so he went to meet them. Then another woosh of wind came it blew him to a zoo called"The Licoln Park Zoo". He saw his favorite animal the Crocldile. Next he was pushed across a lake and flew into a theater called the CHICAGO theater. He Saw his favorite play Jursey Boys. Then he landed on to a fairrs wheel at a Peiar called Navy Peiar. There he went to a childrens Musesum and saw more fake food at the little domniks. He flew out of th musemum and into a plane. Thats weird because he is inside a mesum called The Musemum of Science and Insdtry. Then He flew into a aqurima Called The Shead Aqueaum. Ther he saw fish jellyfish and his favorite SHARKS. Finnnaly he flew back to the ballon stand and went to rest.That is how Benny The Ballon Knows his Way around Chicago. The End
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cool and nice job your story got 208 reads:) ( from a friend u know )