in New Jersey
May 30th, 2008
Author's Note: This is a story that just came out of my head, but whether you like it or not you should think about what it's saying even if it is unrealistic. Enjoy.
My name is Beth Marian Jones. If this was not a story, but real life, you wouldn't believe one word I'm saying. Well what if I told you this was a true story.
I'm living in the year 2020. I'm currently a normal 13 year old girl who was born in 2007. I remember when I looked outside and it was clear and I could actually breath in the air. Now I'm forribdden to go outside by mother and father's orders because with one inhale you're lungs are automaticly black. That's how polluted our air is, but we live in the suburbs. Imagine what the city's like. I nor my parents have ever been to the city since our air was polluted.
How was our air polluted, you ask? That's what I'm about to explain.
In the years 2009, 2010, and 2011 so many people used so much energy that most people get from pwer plants. Atleast some of us.
Power plants put chemicals in our air polluting it. The pollution did't show until over time.
The second reason wasthat many people didn't drive hybrid cars. That affected us greatly. All that exaushtion coming from those cars turned our sky black over time.
I only pray that our sun will shine again and that I don't die of lung cancer the next day.
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With the exception of a few
With the exception of a few story errors this is very good, especially the title!
Talentum est vestri left angelus quod vestri angelus vestri vox. ~
Talent is your left angel and your angel your right.
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I like it! There are a few
I like it! There are a few errors though. But over all it could be a very interesting story
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