Can We Save Them?
in the quest for the next great Prophicy (and back!)
May 23rd, 2010
AN: A lot more serious than most my writing. About smoking.
Another puff of smoke
Another eleven minutes
Of life
Gone
Might be thought of as
A short time
Meaningless
But every second is
Precious
When so much of life
Has already
Ticked away
Can we save them?
You might think they
Don't know this
Most do
Some ignore it
Wishing to be gone
From this world
But others are restlessly
Trying to destroy
This monsterous
Obsession
Can we save them?
Millions of lives
With deaths spead
Up
Their graves scattered
Across the landscape
For miles
Can we save them?
Millions of souls
Who weren't the cause
But suffered
Diseases
From the polloution
Can we save them?
Millions of unborn
Who never had a
Chance
At life
For it was taken
Away
By the addiction
Of somebody
Else
Can we save them?
Millions of minors
Who never knew
Of their parents
Who were taken
Away
Months, weeks
Even days
After their birth
Can we save them
Or are we too late
Will they leave
This world
Soon
Possibly
Being the cause
Of other's
Departures
From life
Too?
They must save themselves
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Wow. That's really deep. It's super good too. I hate smoke from cigarettes. It's so dangerous and harmful to so many people, as you have artfully pointed out. Bravo, Bree.
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Thanks. :) My friend did a speech on it. That's were I got the 11 minutes fact.
If most of your favorite charecters are villans, put this in your sig so you can creep people out.
Save the trees. Start by not doing homework.
Wow. THats really cool! It is really different from what you usually write, but who cares? It's awesome! Its good to be able to write in many ways!
Insanity is my magic...
Another thing: At my school's eight grade graduation *I didn't graduate, I'm going in to seventh grade next year* One of the graduate's fathers has lung cancer. He has it really bad, he can hardly breathe on his own and has to be fed through a tube going up his nose. The whole time, he was SMOKING. Stuff like this makes me really sad.
If most of your favorite charecters are villans, put this in your sig so you can creep people out.
Save the trees. Start by not doing homework.