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Can You Hear Me?

Can You Hear Me?

by Lizzie
in in my tiny cubicle / private vacuum with books and random dancing

October 19th, 2010

I lied

I admit it

I'm sorry

There, I said it

Come on

Don't be mad at me

Can you just

listen to my plea?

But you're not listening

You're shutting me out

I'm sorry you're hurting

Can you hear me shout?

Good friends -

Not anymore.

Pains me to see

How close we were before.

Yeah, I hurt you

I see it on your face

It's agonizing for me too

But I'll give you some space

But you're not listening

You're shutting me out

I'm sorry you're hurting

Can you hear me shout?

It hurts for me

To see I've hurt you

Talk to me!

Do you doubt my sincerity?

Punish me!

Do whatever to make us

friends again.

I wish

You'd pick up when I call

You don't.

 

 

 


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This is a very nicely

This is a very nicely written poem but you labeled it 'true story'. Is it true? Just wondering.

Your very good at writing though!

*smirks* "This is absurd! You don't know me and I don't know you and we are not having this conversation at all! I sought out to thank you and now that I have thanked you... Mr. Dawson, it was a pleasure..." *shakes hand hastily* - Rose DeWik Bukktar

Posted by Katie on Tue, 10/19/2010 - 05:32
I like it. "You can't always

I like it.

"You can't always expect my usual brand of stupidity. I like to mix it up, keep you on your toes." -Patrick Star

“Sanity and happiness are an impossible combination.” -Mark Twain

Posted by L. S. Tredom on Tue, 10/19/2010 - 06:28
Thank you guys!! :D yes it

Thank you guys!! :D

yes it is a true story. But my friend and I have patched up now, so it's fine :)

"books - the world in a nutshell." ~ me. Visit moi at my art blog :) inmypalette.blogspot.com Follow me on my blog!! :D

Posted by Lizzie on Tue, 10/19/2010 - 09:00


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