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(help me think of a title!!)--excerpt

(help me think of a title!!)--excerpt

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by Er-Bear (Erin)
in Texas

July 2nd, 2011

Streams of sunlight filtered through my blinds, waking me up. I was late. My eyes fluttered open, and I immediately got up and ready. If I was to go anywhere today, I’d better start early. I hastily combed through my golden-blonde hair, and tied it up with a sea green ribbon, the only one I could find. Glancing up, I noticed that I hadn’t even packed yet. Dang, I thought to myself. I thought I did. As I hurriedly threw random scraps of clothing into my satchel, I reflected absentmindedly on why I was leaving. It wasn’t a pleasant memory. You see, my story resembles the ancient, varied story of Cinderella, except I’m almost positive I won’t end up with a prince charming.  


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Ahhh this is awesome!! I

Ahhh this is awesome!! I don't have any title suggestions, I can't quite tell what would fit at this point!

When people ask me what my problem is I say, "Nothing. I just haven't lost my childhood creativity and longing to explore the world."

Posted by Moogle on Sat, 07/02/2011 - 11:25
Hmm, awesome

Hmm, awesome story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Here's some titles

* A Cinderella Story

*Golden Hair

*Sea Green Ribbon

 

Sorry, those aren't very good. Maybe if there were more excerpts I could find a title for you. :)

AWESOME STORY though! :D

*~Dreamwalker~*The First in the Trilogy

Posted by Rachel on Sat, 07/02/2011 - 13:57


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