Dark Illusions Reboot! (Summery & Link to Chapter 1)

Back in July, I wrote a story called Dark Illusions. It was intened to be this story about a girl, trapped in a world she created without even knowing it. I wrote one chapter, then stopped, because I thought it was really bad. (Even though a lot of people read it and gave me positive feedback. I was a weird kid.) Now, with a new year and my newfound confidence in my work, I decided to bring this story back! (Along while writing another story called How To Become A High Class Criminal) Just in case you didn't read my story before or have forgotten it, here is the summery.

Okay, so this story is adventure/mystery/ horror. Here's the main plot. Tell me what you think! Also, I would love ideas for the title. Enjoy!

Rose is a regular, 13 year old girl. However, she has nightmares. Not nightmares about coming to school naked. Not nightmares about failing a test. Not nightmares about a giant cupcake falling on top of you. These nightmares take place somewhere full of gray and horror. Rose swears they are just dreams. Or are they? Tragic events start to happen, and no one knows why. Rose starts to act in ways she can't control. Are her dreams linked to any of this? Soon, Rose will go one trip of her life....but may not be able to leave.

Dun, dun, DUUUUNNNNN! If you liked that, and would like to read the first chapter, here is the link: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/dark-illusions-chapter-1-stor...

Okay, so that's about it! Look out out for Dark Illusions on the NSP, along with How To Become A High Class Criminal if your interested in that, too. :)

Happy Writing Everyone!