Death Shark Chapter 1

by Illegal Llama in WHY DO YOU NEED TO KNOW!!!

One hot day in California I was swimming in the ocean, and I saw a fin. Then I  ran out screaming SHARK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Then everybody ran of the beach. Then the next day I was at my hotel. It was called "La Fin." I was reading the newspaper in my room. The news was a little boy had been swallowed whole by a Great White Shark. I wondered who it was. I hope that it wasn't my little brother Jake. Then I read on and the newspaper said scientists' research showed that the shark had been here since 2000. I      said"Wow then the shark must be pretty big."   So, then I went walking on the beach with my little brother, and I told him not to go into the ocean, but he did anyways. I looked all night for him, but I couldn't find him. Then at one spot  where I was looking for  him a bloody skeleton popped out of the water. Then I knew he was dead.  I ran back to my mother in tears. I said "Jake is dead."        "WHAT!" my mother screamed. So we had a funearal.