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Detective Yoshi and doctor Aishi

Detective Yoshi and doctor Aishi

by Aida
in Jinja

August 23rd, 2010



It was a clear Monday morning in China, Hong Kong when the wise great detective Yoshi and her assistant Dr. Aishi got out of the car and went up to their office. The two were brother and sister. They were in for a shock when they opened the door to find all their important documents scattered on the floor. “Oh no!”cried doctor Aishi “They must have been looking for the top secret blue print about our newest inventions of a time machine”.”Lets see if we still have them!”exclaimed detective Yoshi. “They are gone!”screamed doctor Aishi in despair after checking. They were all sad because that was what they were going to present in the fair of inventions. Other inventors were also making inventions.

Detective Yoshi and doctor Aishi just stared in silence. Then they made a list of the suspects

This is how it looked:

Detective Lesli

Doctor  Cornish

Doctor Chan sir

Detective Koron

The jail breaker called Moshe

•  Secretary John Sang

They were all inventors except the last two. The jail breaker was a wanted thief while John Sang was their secretary. Detective Yoshi did not want to add John Sang but she had  to add him because he sleeps at the office. They searched all the offices of the doctors and detectives,interrogated them,and even involved the police but they found nothing. The other inventors got annoyed and turned against them.

 

They also found out that the jail breaker had been caught again so they had to rule him out. “There must be someone else,”said detective Yoshi rather nervously.

John Sang is worth investigating,” said doctor Aishi.

I guess so,” answered detective Yoshi. "The only reason we did not search him first is the fact that we trust him a lot but it would have only been logical to search his quarters first"said doctor Aishi.

They got into his room and found John Sang working on a very mysterious machine that doctor Aishi recognized as their newest invention. “You traitor!”exclaimed detective Yoshi.

I trusted you and then you stole our blueprint in return!”.

Am sorry but I also wanted to be a famous inventor like you,” sobbed John Sang.

We shall not tell the cops but we shall have to fire you because we cant trust you anymore,”said doctor Aishi.

Doctor Aishi is suspicious how John Sang could have worked on the invention in the office because that is really dumb but John tells them that they probably would have not thought that anyone could do it so openly in the office and that he was planning to change the blueprint a bit so that no one could recognize it as theirs when he became famous.

Detective Yoshi got back the blueprint and finished the work that John had started. Three months later, they took their time machine to the fair and won a million dollars for best invention of the year.

THE END

By Aida Kiirya Namukose

 

 

 


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great story  

great story

 

Posted by Yamina on Mon, 08/23/2010 - 03:19
Cool, I found the font a

Cool, I found the font a little hard to read though

 

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