FOR DRAGONWRITER: Contest entry, by Ashley (A Star)
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Ashley in a balloon; the only way is up. |
March 4th, 2010
The way the water flows with her
Is the way the world shall follow.
A bright laugh is her enchanting lure
Her footsteps become hallow.
Her touch can bring days of ecstasy,
Her smile nights of imaginings.
She’s the heroine of our own phantasy,
The sword smiting all enemies in destructive happenings.
To many, her lovely appearance
Is nothing more than a flat image.
Hopes in meeting her become perseverance,
And hundreds travel to her city in competition.
When the gallant red carpet has been laid
For her sacred steps,
Lights flash, and for a look at her face money is paid,
A heavy burden of perfection she shleps.
Thirty minutes later, colorful lights fall upon the stage
And she’s revealed once again.
Her heavenly voice seeps in the air,
her invisible cage locked in.
Thrills cry out for her touch
For her money and fame
Her response was appreciative for the lust
But her feeling of betrayal untame.
After the show, she walks backstage,
Grabs a bottle, and
Doesn’t stop drinking
Until ever last drop was gone, every little inkling.
Her hallow steps turn shallow
As she wanders on the streets,
Her body and voice admired,
But her heart deserted, undesired.
She slams her glass bottle against the brick wall,
It’s edges shatter.
The glass turned red as she plunges it
Deep into her chest.
She forgets the ones that will miss her,
The ones that loves her best.
I screamed when I passed by that sad, dark alley,
Inked with blood red crime.
Trembling hands reached for her silky hair,
Untouched by the bloody mess.
Tears stream down my lonely cheeks,
A crushed dream in wounded distress.
My own beloved mother gone,
Because of a world of perfectionist press.
Note: This poem is about how the child admires and secretly wants to be like her famous mother, but also what it'd be like to lose her because of the other and her mother's own flaws, like always intensely leaning toward perfection.
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good job! I like it! now let's see what you're up against...
95% would cry if they saw ROBERT PATTINSON (Edward Cullen - Twilight, New Moon) standing on top of a sky scraper about to jump. If you're one of the 5% who would sit there eating pop corn saying "DO A FRONTFLIP!!" copy this and paste it in your signature
Lol, thanks! ^^
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