Elf War
in Pennsylvania
February 17th, 2009
The elves silently walked towards the Bogan army.Bogans are the most fowl creatures in the country of Bolgainia.They have long pointed fangs, turqoise skin, yellow beady eyes,and they are as strong as a bolder.Bogans communicate with each other with snake like hissing noises.They also smell like cow poop.As the elves crept closer they got more,and more worried that they were all going to be caught and slaghtered,and most importantly lose the war.All of a sudden the elves jumped out at the Bogan army with unhuman like quickness.The Bogans wre so surprised by the elves attack,that they fled,and ran into another universe(I never said they were tough).The elves had won the war, and won the land of Bolgainia for themselves.They went to the Yogo tavern to celebrate their success.They later renamed Bolgainia to Elvandia.
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Good concept but it needs more description and...well...Voice I guess you could call it..
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