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Endless Dark by:Emma G.

Endless Dark by:Emma G.

by Mrs. Hackett's Fifth Graders
in Georgia

November 28th, 2007

As it stays ,asit goes
who really knows?
When moma turns out the light,
how is there nothing in sight?
I try to play a game,
but still it's all the same.
I try and try with all my might
although my heart is filled with fright!
I will always be scared of the dark
because it gave me a permanent mark.


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exellent!

exellent!

Posted by Heather on Wed, 11/28/2007 - 11:03
Aw, I love the last

Aw, I love the last line.
Keep on going and you might end up like Paige!

Posted by Kazel on Wed, 11/28/2007 - 13:59
That was beatuiful!!!!!!

That was beatuiful!!!!!!
Daija N.

Posted by Heather on Wed, 11/28/2007 - 15:12
wow,

wow, excellent!

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My mind is with you! Mentally! ~ me at cross country practice

Posted by Katherine Elli on Wed, 11/28/2007 - 17:03
So

So good!

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"I'll never tell. You know that. I'll threaten, but never tell." My best friend, "Doe"

Posted by Rosalie on Wed, 11/28/2007 - 18:04


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